Hi there! I hope you enjoy this poem I wrote this evening. Please feel free to comment with any feedback you might have. Thanks!
My dreams are like stars,
Hanging just out of reach,
And I stand just below
The branch of the tree
Where they hang glowing brightly
And tantalize me,
Seeming quite so impossible
For me to achieve.
Awesome simile! I really like how you allow your poetry to build line by line right up to the resolution.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it
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