Hi there! I hope you enjoy this poem that I wrote this evening. Please give it a like if you enjoyed it, and if you have a moment, I would really love any feedback that you could give me, especially on any ways I could improve my writing. Thanks!
My eyes are closed,
And the sunset presses on my folded lids
With a gentle warmth, bathing my skin golden;
Scenting the darkness behind these blinds with honey-sweetness,
A viscous calm that seeps slowly beneath my skin as I drift away,
Into lemon-scented dreams.