Hi there! This is poem I wrote recently which I hope you enjoy. In this piece I tried to concentrate on sounds and line breaks – do you think they worked? Leave me a comment and let me know your thoughts!
I Cried for the Wind
Today, the wind told me a secret in a breath of air brushing past my ear in a sinuous caress; they told me of all the places they had been and the things that they had seen, and I wondered how they were still so weightless. I wondered how they had not grown heavy and dropped like my heart grew heavy and my tears fell in silent mourning for the wind.
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~ Lucy x